The Dark Thrall: Mating Olivia Reviews

Chapters are short and expensive. Besides errors in character names, pronouns etc (I.e. when meant to be in Micheal's view, he sees Cami touching Micheal -should be Sid. Or using her/hers when should be him/his. Inconsistency in pet names for Jay, Killian, and Nick -daddy, dad, and papa were mixed. Would have liked to read the Mating Cermony between both sets (Olivias mates and Everlys). Didnt feel like Micheal fully got to unleash his beats or demon. Beautiful story otherwise.

So far I love this novel..I found it through an ad in a game I was playing and downloaded alpha novel soni could read what happened next..... .it's a page turner for real and keeps me wanting more. I wish the chapters were a little longer as they go by really quick but that also might be just because it's that's good. Some spots can get quite racy and I was not expecting it to be as explicit as it is, so I can't read it in public but it's so good

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This novel is jam packed with steamy scenes. Definitely worth the read! The dynamic between the female lead, Olivia, and the two mates, Killian and Jay. I’m intrigued as to what happens next with Olivia’s ex. I have the feeling like he is meant to cross paths with Olivia, Jay, and Killian again and as if he’s somehow intertwined with them since he felt like obeying Jay even though Jay isn’t his alpha. I guess we shall see…

Loving this book. It’s very interesting, I have not seen a book with wolves and dragons in it before. I am interested to see what happens when they take her home and introduce themselves to her baby. I am also interested to find out what happened with her fated mate as there seems to be a bit of a mystery about that as well. I would really recommend this book to anyone that likes a lot of spice! Xxx

I’ve been on a rollercoaster of emotions laughing and crying the story is a must read ! You won’t want to put it down the plot is beautifully written and the characters are so endearing you want the best for each character. The love story is what makes it so special the author has thought about every single detail bringing them to life and making you understand each of them in such a beautiful way can’t wait for the next Book from this amazing author

Wow. Took a while to get there but this one is hot! Honestly didn't think i would like it because it isn't my normal type of romance, but I haven't been able to stop reading. I'm only barely getting to the really juicy stuff and the temperature went from slow simmer to blazing real fast. I've only just started enjoying werewolf romance and decided to give this one a shot and I'm glad I did. Definitely looking forward to exploring more books like this one. The multiple mates is an unexpected excitement.

. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .Great story line, well fleshed out char acters. And a good repr esen tation of b d s m. And how a poly relation ship can work. Also mat ure the mes, well writ ten. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

This has been a beautiful book so far. I'm loving the intensity and the flashbacks. Im loving the MMF dynamic and the shifters. You can bever go wrong with dragons. Im excited to learn more about the runes and see how Everly plays into their lives. And I hope Nick gets some type of closure. I honestly don't know what happened with the messages but im worried it'll put a test to this new bonding. This is an amazing writer who knows how to keep you on your toes!

This novel is both hot and tender at the same time. I do not recommend you to read it in public! I Wish the chapters had been a little longer, so yoy dont have to stop every third minutes ro pay ore wath many adds. But thats the app i guess... i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i i